Saturday, October 9, 2010

Artifact 6

A Soldier in war(realism)
All we do is fight
“Behold the power of England” is all they say
Ceasing fire is all I hope
Diminishing the enemy is all they want
Everything seems hopeless to me
Fear I can't return to my family
Giant gun fell on my head
Hoping reaper is not heading toward me
I see lights surrounding me 

 

1 comment:

  1. 1.8 point
    2.Good description of soldiers' feeling in war
    3.Perhaps you can give some description of soldiers' duty

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